David Benoit UPDAAAAATE
I'm getting excited about this. I've been working really hard on getting the details smoothed out. I got the ornament looking a little more translucent/ refined. Also, the snow. I changed the type. I'm not sure if I will keep it this way but I realized I had to have everything same size. Hoping this is acceptable. I tried doing some more 3 dimensional type with paper and it just looked weird with the illustration. I decided to go with the darker background based on all of my feedback. My feedback was basically to refine the details, they liked the ornament with a bit of tree to give it something to hang on to. Everyone liked the type with the snow but I decided against it. They also all said that it felt like charlie brown christmas, and that the symbolism was working. I already have details in mind that I want to refine but I feel like I'm almost there.