I edited my poster this morning. The bottom version is the edited version. I spaced it out a bit and made the dates go from August to November. October is the most visible. Before, December was kind of confusingly placed in the center. The edited version goes in succession. I wanted it to feel like time was passing, a rushed view. The type forces the movement. The type and image are disrupting each other but not so much that the message is completely lost. One idea is more important than the other, that being October. The message is animated and energized and the scenario is surreal.